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Sorry for the delayed reply. Anyway, thanks for reading it and also for giving your opinions. :) Godbless!

she's nowhere... she's lost... wonder if she could ever be back on the right track again. she's strong, yet so fragile. that one pain... could shatter her. she seems happy ...

nice one.. this line im kinda relate to it 'And make you forget that somebody' keep it up.

The greatest irony of love is loving the right person at the wrong time, having the wrong person when the time is right, and finding out you love someone right ...

I am glass melting on sunburned skin; counting my lucky stars as they fall, but they're falling, leaving behind the blank the boring, a heavy, hallow darkness that sits behind ...

thank you!

I see you Through foggy glass, This window that seperates us, My hand upon it. seperates? misspelled word. As you lay asleep I ponder, Wondering how this could be? The ...

Hi there! Quite a nice poem! I enjoyed it. The biggest thing that bothered me: The abuse of the ellipsis (the ...) I don't really mind it in poetry but ...

This is a really good poem, I like it. then again I like alot of things...hehe :P starred it...:) Keep up the good work..=) thank you so much. have a ...

i'm quite affected on your piece. me and my ex had just separated, and i'm hoping someday we could be back together..

gosh, it caught my attention dear.. its so intriguing.. have a nice day!

it's good... is this your advocacy?? to save animals' lives?? hope through this people might be aware that even animals have right to live. god bless!

If only you could see me this way... Then maybe you'd sense how tormented I am now.. How pressured I am with your look.. Your voice echoes inside my room ...